Stories

Hey everyone!

I have a story in my head, but I need suggestions. I'm not gonna telling the real story, but here's the plot.

A girl called Ivy Styx is a daughter Hades, but she is also a descendant of Aphrodite, Apollo, and Hecate. But she doesn't know. She was left by Hades and her mom had already died. But then she was adopted by a lady named Aunty Em and her daughter Michelle G. But it turns out Aunty Em is Medusa herself. Ivy ran away with Michelle and finally meet with Thomas, a satyr. He brought them to Camp Demigod Valley. She meet Chris Kellen, Alexie Dare, Sandra Haze, and Nile Lovak. One day she found out her dad is Hades and made a party for her friends, but she also made a wish so Hades would come. But when he didn't came, she change completely. She then joined Chris who turned out to be a traitor. But her friends and family manage to calm her down and she left Chris. But Chris still tried to make her join his cause. But when she had her birthday party Hades finally came, but he also brought bad news. It turns out because of her heritage, the Fates decided to even the scales by cursing her with a curse they called The Sirens Curse. She was beautiful, an amazing singer, and she had magic in her blood. So the Fates decided t's a perfect fit.

So that is my plot.

My question for you is, do you like it or do you like me to change a few things. Comment down below and I'll check it out.

P.S If it sounds like Percy Jackson, well, that was my inspiration. So no offense.

Peace out!